Comments on: Week 10 – Sleep? Maybe later. http://www.willk.com/am_blog/2005/12/05/week-10-sleep-maybe-later/ (also available for immediate hire!) Wed, 21 Feb 2007 07:45:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=abc By: John Doublestein http://www.willk.com/am_blog/2005/12/05/week-10-sleep-maybe-later/comment-page-1/#comment-36 John Doublestein Tue, 06 Dec 2005 03:06:08 +0000 http://www.willk.com/am_blog/index.php/2005/12/05/week-10-sleep-maybe-later/#comment-36 Yo Will, your suff is good as always so, *insert random encouragement here*. The only thing that bothers me is around frame 66 when he takes the step to the shelf. I'm not sure why it bothers me, but one thing that may help is to leave the left foot pointing toward the camera, instead of pointing at the cauldrin, so it feels more like he dragged the foot a bit instead of took a regular step. Yeah Maybe that's it - I think it seems like he's too close to need to take a step, it seems more like a big reach would get him over to the shelf. So dragging the left foot a bit might help. Maybe even twisting the hips more would help, since it seems all the twist comes from the spine. Anyhow, I hope that helped. You definetley improved the pose where he grabs his throat, it's way better leaning off to one side! Good work! -john doublestein Yo Will, your suff is good as always so, *insert random encouragement here*.
The only thing that bothers me is around frame 66 when he takes the step to the
shelf. I’m not sure why it bothers me, but one thing that may help is to leave
the left foot pointing toward the camera, instead of pointing at the cauldrin, so
it feels more like he dragged the foot a bit instead of took a regular step. Yeah
Maybe that’s it – I think it seems like he’s too close to need to take a step, it
seems more like a big reach would get him over to the shelf. So dragging the left
foot a bit might help. Maybe even twisting the hips more would help, since it
seems all the twist comes from the spine. Anyhow, I hope that helped. You
definetley improved the pose where he grabs his throat, it’s way better leaning
off to one side! Good work!

-john doublestein

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