I’m getting a Siggraph Reel together, and I want this clip on it. The clip started as a run cycle and just grew from there. I’ve been working on and off on it for a couple weeks now, and it’s about ready for some critique.

Runnin’ and Jumpin’

Please look at it and tell me what you think can be improved. You don’t have to be an animator to comment (most everyone can tell if something looks bad).