Well, this last week it was pointed out that the head nods make it look like the character is talking, but they don’t really tell what he’s feeling with that. I was going for an excited “thank you” but it didn’t really come accross. I decided to add a kiss in the middle to really show how he feels about his new present. I also fixed a few minor things that we’re looking weird.

Present, Polished

There’s still more to work on, though. Look for a final revision next week, and please let me know anything that should be added.